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When Turtle arrived the restaurant, all the customers start to stare him while drinking wine.
Someone shouted, "Turtle, why do you come back to the Academic Platform?"
He did not answer. He told the shopkeeper, "Warm two bowls of wine. I also want a textbook. He then put nine dollars out.
The customers then deliberately shouted,"You must be expelled by the Galden brothers again!"
Turtle widened his eyes and said," How can you wrong me like that?"
"What wronging? On the day before yesterday, I saw that you was ridiculed by the brothers. They even hanged you up and beat you."
Turtle's face turned red and his veins in his forehead expanded, and he refuted, "Quitting cannot be counted as expelled......Quitting! ENTJ with IQ135, would he be expelled?"
Then there are some statements which were difficult to understand, like "Entering university is MK behavior", and "People who get a good result in Chinese Language and Culture in HKALE are all male-dog." Everybody laughed because of these statements. There are fresh air full of the restaurant.
Someone shouted, "Turtle, why do you come back to the Academic Platform?"
He did not answer. He told the shopkeeper, "Warm two bowls of wine. I also want a textbook. He then put nine dollars out.
The customers then deliberately shouted,"You must be expelled by the Galden brothers again!"
Turtle widened his eyes and said," How can you wrong me like that?"
"What wronging? On the day before yesterday, I saw that you was ridiculed by the brothers. They even hanged you up and beat you."
Turtle's face turned red and his veins in his forehead expanded, and he refuted, "Quitting cannot be counted as expelled......Quitting! ENTJ with IQ135, would he be expelled?"
Then there are some statements which were difficult to understand, like "Entering university is MK behavior", and "People who get a good result in Chinese Language and Culture in HKALE are all male-dog." Everybody laughed because of these statements. There are fresh air full of the restaurant.
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